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Sep 15, 06, 11:03 PM
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The Blood Runs Red
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The Power
The Power within our souls will Sprout and Grow.
To the heaves we go, Higher and Higher.
Passed the lake of stars and throe the rivers of knowledge
Into the Sea of Fate.
As we row along the glaciers of sadness. and despair
We look back, hoping to still see a glimpse of the pass, and not knowing what the currant has led them too.
Some will float there as many will pass on by with only there self on their mind.
Those to stop and take a min. will find the a stick to help push them along.
To the heaves we go and the plant will grow and Stout offspring which will take the same pass and will find the own soul.
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Sep 16, 06, 09:13 AM
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Re: The Power
That sounds so much like a good video game lol That was really good
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Sep 16, 06, 04:54 PM
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Re: The Power
Thanks
I did it just before i went to bed....lol
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Sep 16, 06, 07:47 PM
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Re: The Power
Well, it's real good. Insomnia is a godsend to dark writing.
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Sep 17, 06, 12:41 AM
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HOLY DIVER
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Re: The Power
Me like
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Sep 17, 06, 10:33 AM
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Re: The Power
Ty TY
Now kiss my feet...j/k
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Sep 17, 06, 01:20 PM
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Re: The Power
Nice nice. 2thumbs
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Sep 18, 06, 02:10 AM
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Re: The Power
Your feet are nasty lookin though
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