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Aug 31, 06, 06:15 PM
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The Blood Runs Red
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As the Earth devours our Shells
As the Earth Devours our Shells, were lifted from the curse that binds us to this world.
The chains have been unlocked and we become free spirits.
To roam the stream of life and to see if there's more intended for us.
As we soar in the clouds of confusion, We come across two paths.
One path going right and the other going left, We stop to think of which one we should walk.
When those start to think which one is shorter they will find them self in a very unhappy place but for those who take there time and just walk one.
They will soon find Great warmth in there body and soon will arrive at there final destination.
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Aug 31, 06, 06:17 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Very nice, how about putting some spaces between the lines?
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Aug 31, 06, 06:19 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Nice one Red
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Aug 31, 06, 06:25 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Thanks
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Aug 31, 06, 06:26 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
No prob
Keep it up
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Aug 31, 06, 06:29 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
I fill like I'm still in school. "Keep up the good work in English class"
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Aug 31, 06, 06:31 PM
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HOLY DIVER
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Lucky you, not going to school anymore.
<< I'm supposed to be there now
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Aug 31, 06, 07:55 PM
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arite pal
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Aw, dude, I love that!
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Aug 31, 06, 08:01 PM
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HOLY DIVER
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
almost as good as dookies
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Sep 01, 06, 08:12 AM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
As the earth devours ur shell, i steal ur soul
Mwhahahaha....not joking
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Sep 01, 06, 09:45 AM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Almost
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Sep 01, 06, 01:46 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
First thing is it's not going to the same way is dookie.
All it's there is too is make you think.
Art is Art and will never die
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Sep 01, 06, 07:41 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Punk is alive and that will never fail, without destruction.
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Sep 01, 06, 08:03 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
ooo i like these make you think poems.. sounds good
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Sep 01, 06, 08:54 PM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
It really does sound like a short story
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Sep 03, 06, 03:36 AM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
All this discussion is hurting my head
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Sep 03, 06, 08:59 AM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Well, my work here is done.
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Sep 03, 06, 11:29 AM
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Sep 07, 06, 02:51 AM
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Re: As the Earth devours our Shells
Beans beans the musical fruit
the more you eat the more you toot
............. I did a funny
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